tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post1794276971197622405..comments2014-06-26T07:38:33.177-07:00Comments on Dangerous Territory: Chapter OneSuper_Kiwihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18000771355101318462noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-23522261405764565422009-10-12T11:46:13.914-07:002009-10-12T11:46:13.914-07:00Awesome Start!! I'm so excited to be following...Awesome Start!! I'm so excited to be following a new story from you... best of luck with it but from what I can see so far, I'm gonna be hooked.joviswillowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04737797998640956836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-14615262658950973922009-10-11T10:12:00.122-07:002009-10-11T10:12:00.122-07:00Great start!!
Now bring on more please!Great start!!<br />Now bring on more please!Judithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08086532905120600182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-24904174798060879092009-10-10T17:47:06.100-07:002009-10-10T17:47:06.100-07:00Why do I have a bad feeling already about what'...Why do I have a bad feeling already about what's coming? Jon poking around gangs? Not a good idea. <br /><br />So....wonder how they're going to get along? Fireworks from the start or a more gradual building of....tension?<br /><br />As an ex-marine at least she'll have his parents approval. :)norwichlizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17091614197259764631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-43541944932423639312009-10-10T17:14:17.849-07:002009-10-10T17:14:17.849-07:00Well hello there Mac! I'm so glad you started ...Well hello there Mac! I'm so glad you started putting this up. You definitely tightened it from the original version. ;)<br /><br />Love bizJon and the rather bizminded Mac.TaraLeighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00342413692746814980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-29961028257432340052009-10-10T16:19:54.714-07:002009-10-10T16:19:54.714-07:00Yay! A new story to sink my teeth into!
Great st...Yay! A new story to sink my teeth into! <br />Great start Kiwi! <br />NEED MORE!!!!!Bayaderrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14496897037198332596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-15538773923134239602009-10-10T16:13:44.555-07:002009-10-10T16:13:44.555-07:00Excellent start - you've whetted my appetite n...Excellent start - you've whetted my appetite nicely now! More soon please!Mystery Trainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02527671716637523544noreply@blogger.com