tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post3148062631685218774..comments2014-06-26T07:38:33.177-07:00Comments on Dangerous Territory: Chapter Thirty-NineSuper_Kiwihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18000771355101318462noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-34638645739293231442010-07-05T12:02:48.731-07:002010-07-05T12:02:48.731-07:00Wow! Great chapter. I could feel the frustration c...Wow! Great chapter. I could feel the frustration come up and off the page. The strangled non-communication to the closed off body language. So Jon to shut down. <br /><br />Taking herself off the case is smart, but its only going to compound the stress for both of them. Too much pain for 2 people to deal with when they both shut down as a first option. <br /><br />Great job, Kiwi. Awesome characterization even if I want to slam their heads together. Because of course that means u did a good job. LOLTaraLeighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00342413692746814980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-47593258795225413412010-07-04T22:39:02.736-07:002010-07-04T22:39:02.736-07:00TALK TO EACH OTHER! They are really like each othe...TALK TO EACH OTHER! They are really like each other! Argh! I'm so scared something bad is about to happen though. Please hurry with more, please!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-6008171642158267502010-07-04T19:19:06.242-07:002010-07-04T19:19:06.242-07:00More chapters A.S.A.P. PLEASE!! Love this story!More chapters A.S.A.P. PLEASE!! Love this story!Kellinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-88272754738937607122010-07-04T17:11:18.794-07:002010-07-04T17:11:18.794-07:00Seems as though Jon has some post traumatic stress...Seems as though Jon has some post traumatic stress that he's dealing with here too on top of everything else. I don't think he will be too happy about the change but given some time he too may just realize that it's the best and safest alternative for everyone. Perhaps once the danger is removed they can begin to truly explore their feelings for one another.rutpophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11666804642598666275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-69699996580538361622010-07-04T14:57:40.984-07:002010-07-04T14:57:40.984-07:00Will he argue or will he just nod and agree that i...Will he argue or will he just nod and agree that it's best that she leave?<br /><br />I have a bad feeling that he's going to withdraw so far into himself that he lets her go, and ignores David - if he even lets him in the door!norwichlizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17091614197259764631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4806559091068573370.post-76868806720991884952010-07-04T13:14:24.610-07:002010-07-04T13:14:24.610-07:00Arrgghhh I'm just as frustrated as they both a...Arrgghhh I'm just as frustrated as they both are! I hope that Mac leaving will make Jon admit his feelings to her. Tresca, you've hooked me and all I want to do is flip to the end of the story right now to see how it ends! Can we have more now?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com